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I'm rushing climbing this ladder,
I shouldn't, but that doesn't matter,
Because I just don't care.
I still want to, I still want to be,
The person I want to see,
The one who has the heart of light.

I want to have the soul, I want to be bold,
I want to be the person who is never cold,
I wish I could sing my song, so everyone could know they're wrong,
Please set me free. Oh yes please, oh please... Set me free.

Sometimes we go through life, absorbing such pride,
We forget how we all felt inside,
Instead we focus on our own growth,
Making sure our tank is never low, and if we were never happy, we would do anything to make it so.

I want to have the soul, I want to be bold,
I want to be the person that is never cold,
I wish I could sing my song, so everyone could know they're wrong,
Please set me free, oh yes please, oh please... set me free.

Some day in life, I want to be a light that shines so bright,
I want to be the person who will always try, no matter the fight,
I will fight, no grip is too tight.

I want to have the soul, I want to be bold,
I want to be the person who is never cold,
I wish I could sing my song, so everyone could know they're wrong,
Please set me free, oh yes please, oh please... Set me free.
-Danielle Carver
Hey guys, hope all is going great for all of you, I also hope you all enjoy this piece here, I'm sure many of you can relate to this, sooooo enjoy! :D
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Branka-Johnlockian Featured By Owner 4 days ago  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Beautiful. Intense. :clap:
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danisaur2015 Featured By Owner 4 days ago  Hobbyist Writer
Lol idk why I'm always intense when I'm trying to make a beautiful poem xD
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Branka-Johnlockian Featured By Owner 4 days ago  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It's still beautiful I said that too in the comment.
It's your passion taking over, or something :)
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danisaur2015 Featured By Owner 3 days ago  Hobbyist Writer
if my passion wants to take over then I won't be mad for one second lol
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Branka-Johnlockian Featured By Owner 3 days ago  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:faint:
It's when you're mad that your biggest and best art take form.
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danisaur2015 Featured By Owner 3 days ago  Hobbyist Writer
That's true lol I don't get mad often I'm a pretty laid back person but some things do give me the drive to be upset enough to write a poem or something :D
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Branka-Johnlockian Featured By Owner 17 hours ago  Hobbyist Digital Artist
When one's in love one write the sweetest and soppiest poems.
When one's mad one write the most vivid and strongest poems.
So, stay mad a write a lot of poems :lmao:
I like the strong ones, oh and the funny ones too :D
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danisaur2015 Featured By Owner 17 hours ago  Hobbyist Writer
Lol I'm still working on the funny writing xD
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InGodzHandz Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2017  Professional Photographer
I can definitely relate.
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danisaur2015 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
:D
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InGodzHandz Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2017  Professional Photographer
Yay for relating!
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Gmatty Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2017
Excellent!
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danisaur2015 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :)
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shades-of-art Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Strong words , i hope you find what you are looking for :heart:
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danisaur2015 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you and you too :)
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ArthurRamsey Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2017  Professional General Artist
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danisaur2015 Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
You giving me these makes me more proud of my poems, this will be the third one I've gotten :) thank you so much for each of them
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ArthurRamsey Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2017  Professional General Artist
It's great work!!! so be proud of all your hard work and diligence to learn your craft. 
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danisaur2015 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
I will have a wonderful day or night :)
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